Can you rate and give opinion on part of my story?

It's good I like it but, I am finding it really tough to like your characters. They seem a little bit wooden, I can't relate to them in any way. Obviously this is just a part of the book and isn't finished so I would say work on making your characters charming or funny/ moany, snidey. All I can go from is what the characters say, and they talk a bit too dull for me. Maybe you are just setting up the average joe part before the **** hits the fan? That would make sense. If that's the case then this could be really good, good luck.